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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 10:40am | IP Logged Quote Jon Filby

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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 11:02am | IP Logged Quote Noel

Newby Filby, a bloke named Jon

Just seen him on the forum, he’s not been here long

Let’s see what he says as time goes on

We’ll count how many times he goes wrong

 

There’s not too much about him on his profile

I guess that we would know him by his smile

Wearing an old tee shirt he’s had a while

But if he saw Timestar, he’d run a mile

 

So after the challenge to write this ode

He does know that him I may always goad

A little light humour, but no grudge I hold

As I may see him when ATF's on the road



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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 11:11am | IP Logged Quote Jon Filby

Thanks Noel - I very much hope that you will see me when ATF are on the road.
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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 5:26pm | IP Logged Quote Zippy

Noel, please may I have a poem also, pretty please.

Your task, should you chose to accept it, is to include all of the list below in the poem..........

Zippy, Wendy, Laser, Suspended Animation, Stuck in Paris, Stranger, After the Fire, Pilgrim, Old and fat and ugly, Hold on to your hats, Your'e one of the lonely people, oh oh oh... oh oh oh, See him running through the streets at night, Looking up I close my eyes.

Good luck with your task.............. This message will self distruct after you have posted my poem !!!!  



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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 11:10pm | IP Logged Quote Noel

It was a cold night on the platform

Waiting for a chance to see the pilgrim perform

The metal chairs with ice on at York station

Left my legs in suspended animation

 

Memories flooding in of distant places

Looking at the time stars in my eyes

Being stuck in Paris was just a dream

While trains go by in reds and green

 

Looking for something to hold on to

Your hats pulled down to be incognito

Stranger things happen as you see him running

Through the streets at night while the winds still blowing

 

If you’re one of the lonely people reading

Or sitting on the platforms, the pigeons feeding

The old and fat and ugly vermin

Waiting for some company you are yearning

 

Looking up I close my eyes tightly

The sun, like a laser shining brightly

Looking for comfort I glance over

And see a room and feel quite sober

 

The waiting room has a rusty lock

Wood floorboards echo with heels that knock

After the fire sits a girl called Wendy

A brief encounter if is she is friendly

 

There you are Zippy this is just for you

Just one more phrase that I must do

Oh oh oh and oh oh oh

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh



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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 11:12pm | IP Logged Quote Seagull

Make it  a Haiku. (17 syllables - should't be a problem for your skills - Zippy doesn't ask for much)LOL

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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 11:15pm | IP Logged Quote Noel

Seagull wrote:
Make it  a Haiku. (17 syllables - should't be a problem for your skills - Zippy doesn't ask for much)LOL

I can't count to 17! Is a Haiku a foreign meal?



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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 11:25pm | IP Logged Quote Seagull

Japanese anyway. Maybe Spam. But I think she'll like yours -its really rather good, despite rhyming Wendy with friendly...

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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 11:32pm | IP Logged Quote Zippy

Excellent work Noel, you have succeeded in the task laid out to you and passed with flying colours. You are now part of a secret ATF agent team. 

As always, if you or any member of your team is captured, all knowledge of you will be denied.

Seagull, JJ (or is it JM) Barrie was the one who invented the name Wendy for Peter Pan, originally known as Peter's 'friendy Wendy'. It didn't exist before that. So Noel's line is spot on ! Expect to be tested by the Agency soon. Your time is coming !!! 



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Posted: 05 February 2010 at 11:35pm | IP Logged Quote Zippy

Or was it JR Hartley !!!  



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